Wikipedia:Peer review/Something (song)/archive1

Something (song)

I just spent an hour on this article. How can it be improved? I'm already considering taking it to WP:FAC after Yesterday (song) expires. Johnleemk | Talk 13:15, 10 Aug 2004 (UTC)

I mentioned on your talk page how much I enjoyed this article - hey, I was the guy who requested it on the Yesterday entry at WP:FAC. However, reading it through again, I'm not sure the final section, "so what are they all raving about anyway?" can't be dropped... It needs adding to, perhaps with some quotes from critics / reviews, at least. Also, forgive me if I'm betraying some style guide ignorance here, but is there a reason why song titles are in "quotes" rather than italics? Still a very good article, however, and I'm sure with some polishing it will easily make featured status. Angmering 20:40, 10 Aug 2004 (UTC)

My idea for the section was to write something about the tune, melody, lyrics, etc. Sorry if that wasn't made clear. Reviews should be going into "An instant hit". And for the song titles, see Wikipedia:Manual of Style (titles). Johnleemk | Talk 11:50, 11 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Got it! :-) Angmering 12:02, 11 Aug 2004 (UTC)