Talk:Visualize EG

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Any HP hardware buffs out there? Would love feedback etc.. --FunkyMonkey

Here's a reference that might be worked into the article (I don't know enough to do it myself.) http://reviews.cnet.com/graphics-cards/hp-visualize-eg-pci/4507-8902_7-405669.html

I did a copyedit to fix a few punctuation, capitalization things -- without changing any of the meaning.

It's not clear which versions of the card are still available. But at any rate, the verb tense in the article should be all present or past, and not flip between the two, since that leads to the impression two different cards are being discussed.

Regards,

Alpha Ralpha Boulevard (talk) 19:19, 1 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]